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« Reply #15 on: September 05, 2012, 05:36:16 am »
This was great! Well done!

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Re: A woman's courage- now with part 2!
« Reply #16 on: September 05, 2012, 07:34:01 am »
Good job with this! I was intrigued by the Worgavic connection.
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Re: A woman's courage- now with part 2!
« Reply #17 on: September 05, 2012, 08:28:42 am »
aww man thats heart breaking :(
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« Reply #18 on: September 05, 2012, 08:59:20 am »
Awwww, it's SOOO freaking sweet!!!  I absolutely LOVE your Marathi POV!

Also, this... "Perhaps she was extremely hormonal, but it delighted her that two of the people Raumesys tried to control the most had been involved in the most extreme of all rebellions." 

That totally cracked me up!
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« Reply #19 on: September 05, 2012, 09:06:12 am »
Oh my... so sweet and heartbreaking. It makes me want to hug but Sicarius and Sespian... and Marathi too. Poor woman...
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Re: A woman's courage- now with part 2!
« Reply #20 on: September 05, 2012, 11:01:22 am »
I had this in my head - clambering to get out

Nice bit of writing.  I enjoyed it. 

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« Reply #21 on: September 05, 2012, 12:26:25 pm »
I really liked this! I thought it was quite nice how you made Marathi sympathetic to Sicarius - I always thought that she would've known what was happening and only made Sespian stay away because she was worried about them being together and her cover being blown. In my mind, she calls Sicarius to her deathbed and tells him how much she appreciates what he did for her :D

I feel the same way, so it was nice to see a different take on things. I also like the hints at Forge starting up; it makes you see new connections. :D
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Re: A woman's courage- now with part 2!
« Reply #22 on: September 05, 2012, 04:44:32 pm »
Oh, love love love part two. Thanks so much for sharing!

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Re: A woman's courage- now with part 2!
« Reply #23 on: September 05, 2012, 08:19:58 pm »
I had this in my head - clambering to get out

Nice bit of writing.  I enjoyed it. 

Welcome to the club of those of us who are tortured by plot bunnies until they write them down.  I warn you, however, once you've done it once it only encourages them to bother you more.  (And then there are those who breed the the bloody plot bunnies....you know who you are!)

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