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Re: The Origin of Trog - Part 4 is up!
« Reply #30 on: August 07, 2012, 01:37:58 pm »
Well, that was a little harder than planned, and I'm still not sure I like how it turned out, but here is part 4 of the story.  Part 5 should be the conclusion and will come in a day or two hopefully.
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Re: The Origin of Trog - Part 4 is up!
« Reply #31 on: August 07, 2012, 02:08:23 pm »
I enjoyed this installment and I think you've set up the ending very well.  Great job!!  ;D

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Re: The Origin of Trog - Part 4 is up!
« Reply #32 on: August 07, 2012, 02:16:09 pm »
What!! A cliffhanger? Plz tell me that Sic comes to the rescue. ...
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Re: The Origin of Trog - Part 4 is up!
« Reply #33 on: August 07, 2012, 02:21:27 pm »
Well, since Trog is there when Sespian is 19, he has to survive now, doesn't he ? :P
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Re: The Origin of Trog - Part 4 is up!
« Reply #34 on: August 07, 2012, 02:30:02 pm »
Oh boy....I can see part 5 is going to be interesting. 

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Re: The Origin of Trog - Part 4 is up!
« Reply #35 on: August 07, 2012, 06:42:07 pm »
Nice! I'm waiting eagerly for part 5. Obviously Trog survives but I want to see Sicarius be all like "You shall not pass!" to the guards with the kitten and him save it :))

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Re: The Origin of Trog - Part 4 is up!
« Reply #36 on: August 07, 2012, 06:55:33 pm »
That was great! I can't wait for Sicarius to save the day. And Raumesys can go er...probably shouldn't say anything else  :D
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Re: The Origin of Trog - Part 3 is now available!
« Reply #37 on: August 07, 2012, 07:09:03 pm »
Yay! Good story!
Oooo I hope Trog ends up giving Raumesys a good bite on the ankle. Meow!  Hiss!

I really tried to get Trog to bite the Emperor, but it just didn't work in the scene, so he clawed him instead...
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Re: The Origin of Trog - Part 4 is up!
« Reply #38 on: August 08, 2012, 02:43:13 am »
Ooh I think Sicarius will save the day.  If Sepsian got Trog this young in life, and he still had him at 19, how old is this cat?!
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Re: The Origin of Trog - Part 4 is up!
« Reply #39 on: August 08, 2012, 04:07:53 am »
Well Sespian's around 10 in this, isn't he? I know a cat that lived to be 23.

Now that I think about this HOLY COW who's looking after Trog now that Sespian's been kidnapped/declared dead??

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Re: The Origin of Trog - Part 4 is up!
« Reply #40 on: August 08, 2012, 04:13:36 am »
Well Sespian's around 10 in this, isn't he? I know a cat that lived to be 23.

Now that I think about this HOLY COW who's looking after Trog now that Sespian's been kidnapped/declared dead??

I know! Is it sad that that's what was going through my mind when they kidnapped him? There might be a servant taking care of him at home but...would Ses leave him alone for so long? And he kinda reminds me of Hedwig (animal friend when you don't have others of your own) :D
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Re: The Origin of Trog - Part 4 is up!
« Reply #41 on: August 08, 2012, 04:20:12 am »
That is not sad at all. I have a contingency plan in place for the zombie apocalypse that includes my dog :D

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Re: The Origin of Trog - Part 4 is up!
« Reply #42 on: August 08, 2012, 04:32:20 am »
Everyone knows that a dog is most important in helping you out in the event of a zombie apocalypse, so good planning :P
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Re: The Origin of Trog - Part 4 is up!
« Reply #43 on: August 08, 2012, 07:25:18 am »
Well, the cat would be around 10 now.  An older cat, but far from impossible.
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Re: The Origin of Trog - Part 4 is up!
« Reply #44 on: August 08, 2012, 07:36:17 am »
Ok that would make sense, just a more active 10 year old cat than ours was.

I suspect Trog has gone off into the air vents and such and made a home in the kitchen with the servents for now.  They like Sespian so they'll take care of his cat
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