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SPOILERS - EE5 - NC-17 : Growing Pains
« on: August 25, 2012, 09:24:08 pm »
This is a short story Mana and I have been working on. As the title suggest, it IS based on informations we get in EE5, and it IS dark. I put it as NC-17 despite the lack of graphic violence for the themes suggested.  I will reprint here the disclaimer :


Title : Growing Pains
A fanfiction of the Emperor's Edge
Authors : A. Findley and C. Malboeuf


Warning : This short story is extremely dark and contains themes of violence and rape of a minor. It is one of those things we just couldn't get out of our mind and had to write it down to... exorcize the image. If you can't bear to think of young Sicarius in that position, please do not read further.
« Last Edit: August 25, 2012, 10:10:57 pm by Moondreamer »
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Re: SPOILERS - EE5 - NC-17 : Growing Pains
« Reply #1 on: August 25, 2012, 09:45:21 pm »
Oh lord, knowing what the rating is and then reading about how it would "probably be a good day" made my heart hurt and I haven't even gotten past that part :(



Damn you, Pike!
« Last Edit: August 25, 2012, 10:07:41 pm by Cael »
Once you've made sure that the signal gets through
There's one final thing that I want you to do
Put me where I'll see stars, so that I can see you
And I'll soar like a leaf on the wind

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Re: SPOILERS - EE5 - NC-17 : Growing Pains
« Reply #2 on: August 25, 2012, 09:51:34 pm »
*dead*

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HIS BIRTHDAY? SERIOUSLY??!!!  :'( :'( :'(

On another (happier) note, I love how we've all accepted that the cook's name is Goytha.
"All right, girl, we are not going to be attracted to the amoral assassin."

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Re: SPOILERS - EE5 - NC-17 : Growing Pains
« Reply #3 on: August 25, 2012, 10:08:50 pm »
*dead*

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HIS BIRTHDAY? SERIOUSLY??!!!  :'( :'( :'(

On another (happier) note, I love how we've all accepted that the cook's name is Goytha.

Heh, yeah. Shoutout. But seriously. I've got to go hug my therapy dog now :(
Once you've made sure that the signal gets through
There's one final thing that I want you to do
Put me where I'll see stars, so that I can see you
And I'll soar like a leaf on the wind

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Re: SPOILERS - EE5 - NC-17 : Growing Pains
« Reply #4 on: August 25, 2012, 10:22:30 pm »
Hmm. I don't know if I should say if this is good or not. Good writing, good story, but terrible topic if that makes sense. Poor Sicarius. I'm thinking of doing something similar to this to get the topic off my mind. Except Sicarius is going to be driving a knife into Pike's chest.

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Re: SPOILERS - EE5 - NC-17 : Growing Pains
« Reply #5 on: August 25, 2012, 10:24:53 pm »
Well, it's definitely not cute, and now that this is off my chest, I'm going back to writing fluffy Sic!daughter and Sespian!girlfriend stuff... it's way lighter...
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Re: SPOILERS - EE5 - NC-17 : Growing Pains
« Reply #6 on: August 25, 2012, 10:29:19 pm »
:( damn...  :'( just damn.

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Re: SPOILERS - EE5 - NC-17 : Growing Pains
« Reply #7 on: August 25, 2012, 11:21:43 pm »
I was very hesitant to read this but I'm glad I did.  I think you did a very good job with an incredibly difficult topic.
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Re: SPOILERS - EE5 - NC-17 : Growing Pains
« Reply #8 on: August 25, 2012, 11:36:00 pm »
Wow, that was intense. I think it's a realistic look into his childhood, and actually I'd love to read more about it (except for the torture* parts of course :( )  Wish I could write fanfic!
On a lighter note, I can definitely see Sicarius gloating like that :)

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Re: SPOILERS - EE5 - NC-17 : Growing Pains
« Reply #9 on: August 25, 2012, 11:40:18 pm »
I have a few things in the works about young!sic.
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« Reply #10 on: August 25, 2012, 11:42:31 pm »
I have a few things in the works about young!sic.

Great!

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Re: SPOILERS - EE5 - NC-17 : Growing Pains
« Reply #11 on: August 25, 2012, 11:45:32 pm »
I have a few things in the works about young!sic.

Great!
And although it will be dark, it won't be NC-17 dark!  *phew*
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Re: SPOILERS - EE5 - NC-17 : Growing Pains
« Reply #12 on: August 26, 2012, 08:42:52 am »
Well, it's definitely not cute, and now that this is off my chest, I'm going back to writing fluffy Sic!daughter and Sespian!girlfriend stuff... it's way lighter...

Yay! Get to it!
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Re: SPOILERS - EE5 - NC-17 : Growing Pains
« Reply #13 on: August 26, 2012, 03:47:17 pm »
Agreed, well written, even if the subject is... distasteful.

The worst of it is... I wouldn't doubt somewhere, some horrible, cruel military had a project just like our Sicarius.