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Re: Romance and Mayhem
« Reply #15 on: August 28, 2012, 07:46:05 am »
One more beta to get back and I'll be good to go  ;D
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Re: Romance and Mayhem
« Reply #16 on: August 28, 2012, 08:00:31 am »
who is and we'll go stare at them :o
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Re: Romance and Mayhem
« Reply #17 on: August 28, 2012, 08:01:33 am »
who is and we'll go stare at them :o

I'm not saying, or she'll accuse me of getting people to stalk her :P
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Re: Romance and Mayhem
« Reply #18 on: August 28, 2012, 08:05:48 am »
butbutbutbutbutbut thats what we do!!!! :o
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Re: Romance and Mayhem
« Reply #19 on: August 28, 2012, 08:08:05 am »
butbutbutbutbutbut thats what we do!!!! :o

Altho, as she's not here this morning, I'm thinking of posting it anyway and doing the changes later...
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Re: Romance and Mayhem
« Reply #20 on: August 28, 2012, 08:20:16 am »
Ok, so, here it is, Chapter 2!  The file contains both Chapter 1 and 2, it's easier than posting at two places...

I've been nervous about introducing the new character... hope you enjoy her :)
 
Edit : I am adding an edited version of chapter 2 with some last minute changes.
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Re: Romance and Mayhem
« Reply #21 on: August 28, 2012, 08:30:58 am »
Ah so cute! Thalia sounds interesting too XD

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Re: Romance and Mayhem
« Reply #22 on: August 28, 2012, 08:40:20 am »
Grrrrrr!  I wanted the next scene!!!!!  Where's the dang reunion?!   
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Re: Romance and Mayhem
« Reply #23 on: August 28, 2012, 08:43:31 am »
I've had a good chuckle imagining Akstyr learning to surf...
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Re: Romance and Mayhem
« Reply #24 on: August 28, 2012, 08:46:58 am »
Aw (I have been saying that way too much lately :P) . I LOVE how Sic can't say no to Adelle.
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Re: Romance and Mayhem
« Reply #25 on: August 28, 2012, 09:33:04 am »
urg!! you people and you're (mostly) happy stories are ruining the emotionless girl! now I'm just a giggling puddle of love for EE.

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Re: Romance and Mayhem
« Reply #26 on: August 28, 2012, 09:41:21 am »
welcome to the world of being corrupted kiddo ;D

loved it but wheres the rest!!!!!!!!!! :o
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Re: Romance and Mayhem
« Reply #27 on: August 28, 2012, 09:50:50 am »
Fantabulous! More!!
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Re: Romance and Mayhem
« Reply #28 on: August 28, 2012, 09:59:14 am »
Fantabulous! More!!

I added your comments in the edited version. Hopefully, it makes things clearer (and makes Sespian sound a little less whiny, he was more snappish in my own mind :P )
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Re: Romance and Mayhem
« Reply #29 on: August 28, 2012, 10:14:42 am »
Oh, no! You've outed me as the slacking beta reader!!
Now your loyal fans are going to come after me with pitchforks! Help!
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