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Evrial (Ch.1-12: very mild R rating; Ch.13: NC-17)
« on: August 29, 2012, 10:11:14 am »
This story will alternate between Yara and Mal's POVs. It's set directly after EE5. And so far is pretty PG-13.

Thanks, as always, to fabulous beta readers!

Enjoy!

Edit: Chapters 4 and 5 are heading towards an R rating.
And Ch.13 will be NC-17!

Final chapter now posted.
« Last Edit: September 25, 2012, 09:05:47 am by Aamartin »
"Perhaps you have not been assiduous enough with your training."

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Re: Evrial
« Reply #1 on: August 29, 2012, 10:16:30 am »
I never thought i'd think of Yara as sweet.  Poor kid
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Re: Evrial
« Reply #2 on: August 29, 2012, 10:17:21 am »
Don't worry. I'm sure Mal will do something to seriously piss her off very soon.
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Re: Evrial
« Reply #3 on: August 29, 2012, 10:19:42 am »
Oh good, i do prefer it went the status quo is back between them, they'll make a perfect couple :D
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Re: Evrial
« Reply #4 on: August 29, 2012, 10:20:18 am »
Niiiice! I'll really be looking forward to see where this is going :)
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Re: Evrial
« Reply #5 on: August 29, 2012, 04:54:06 pm »
Squeeeee

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Re: Evrial
« Reply #6 on: August 29, 2012, 04:56:11 pm »
OMG! Yara is reaming me out on twitter over this. Too weird.
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Re: Evrial
« Reply #7 on: August 29, 2012, 05:06:54 pm »
It's a good sign. Means you hit a nerve. :)

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Re: Evrial
« Reply #8 on: August 29, 2012, 10:26:53 pm »
Too fun!

Can I just say I love the addition of Yara to the EE crew?

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Re: Evrial
« Reply #9 on: August 29, 2012, 10:28:21 pm »
Haaaa! Wait, does this mean I might incur the wrath of any characters that appear in my fanfics? *reconsiders the Am pole-dancing plot bunny*
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Re: Evrial
« Reply #10 on: August 29, 2012, 10:34:37 pm »
Chapter 2 coming soon.

And I brokered a deal with Twitter Yara to lay off of me if I let her stab Mal (just a little) in Chapter 3.
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Re: Evrial
« Reply #11 on: August 30, 2012, 04:43:27 am »
That could be taken in so many contexts >:D
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Re: Evrial
« Reply #12 on: August 30, 2012, 08:18:22 am »
Hmmm, that sounds a whole lot like what twitter Mal said...

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Re: Evrial
« Reply #13 on: August 30, 2012, 09:44:49 am »
Chapter 2. Hope you like it!
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Re: Evrial
« Reply #14 on: August 30, 2012, 09:52:55 am »
Awesome!  :) I didn't understand the "dock my steamship in anybody's waters until later". I actually thought that you were referring to an actual steamship.  ;D
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