Author Topic: Evrial (Ch.1-12: very mild R rating; Ch.13: NC-17)  (Read 36383 times)

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Re: Evrial
« Reply #15 on: August 30, 2012, 10:05:55 am »
"kraken" *snort* :)
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Re: Evrial
« Reply #16 on: August 30, 2012, 10:23:13 am »
Hmmm, that sounds a whole lot like what twitter Mal said...

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don't blame me, i can't understand how to use twitter, let alone what people are posting on it.

and love it, but so want to slap Mal for not getting the conversation he's overhearing
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Re: Evrial
« Reply #17 on: August 30, 2012, 11:44:45 am »
Awww, poor Mal.   :'(   I want to find out what happens next so he can stop being so pitiful!

btw... I love how you wrote Yara.  :)
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Re: Evrial
« Reply #18 on: August 30, 2012, 01:32:34 pm »
Aamartin, this is VERY well written (and quite, um, randy enough for Maldynado's character. Jeepers.)

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Re: Evrial
« Reply #19 on: August 30, 2012, 02:06:20 pm »
Thank you! And that was before I had access to Riamachia's Sextionary. Imagine what he'll say the next time he gets a POV.
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Re: Evrial
« Reply #20 on: September 04, 2012, 09:08:26 am »
The saga continues...
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Re: Evrial
« Reply #21 on: September 04, 2012, 09:21:48 am »
 Crap... I don't want to wait but school is here... :) Bad timing to post it!

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Re: Evrial
« Reply #22 on: September 04, 2012, 09:28:13 am »
I only saw 3 chapters.... "Is that a shower cap"! LOL
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Re: Evrial
« Reply #23 on: September 04, 2012, 09:29:08 am »
Yep. There are just 3 chapters so far. Glad you like the shower cap!
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Re: Evrial
« Reply #24 on: September 04, 2012, 09:39:05 am »
oh classic!  Love the shower cap, just maldynado's style
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Re: Evrial
« Reply #25 on: September 04, 2012, 01:46:03 pm »
Great!! But wait, who was making the, um, rowdy noises?

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Re: Evrial
« Reply #26 on: September 04, 2012, 01:53:06 pm »
Great!! But wait, who was making the, um, rowdy noises?

Yeah I wondered that. Might we find that out next chapter?
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Re: Evrial
« Reply #27 on: September 04, 2012, 02:01:46 pm »
It's an apartment building. Stuff happens in the other apartments. And by stuff I mean sex.

So...unlikely to return to either the deviant acrobats on the 3rd floor or the owner of the shower cap and old lady underwear on the 2nd floor. But you never know. Now that I know that you were so... erm... titillated by Mal's narration of their actions...
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Re: Evrial
« Reply #28 on: September 04, 2012, 02:55:06 pm »
It's an apartment building. Stuff happens in the other apartments. And by stuff I mean sex.

So...unlikely to return to either the deviant acrobats on the 3rd floor or the owner of the shower cap and old lady underwear on the 2nd floor. But you never know. Now that I know that you were so... erm... titillated by Mal's narration of their actions...

Just making sure you got all your bases covered. ;)
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Re: Evrial
« Reply #29 on: September 04, 2012, 06:02:42 pm »
I'm loving this story. And seriously Mal, shower cap?? ;D I guess they don't use it in warrior caste families. Is there going to be a new chapter?