Author Topic: Evrial (Ch.1-12: very mild R rating; Ch.13: NC-17)  (Read 32935 times)

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Re: Evrial
« Reply #30 on: September 04, 2012, 07:01:42 pm »
A fetching shower cap. Oh, Mal... lol!
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Re: Evrial
« Reply #31 on: September 04, 2012, 07:31:30 pm »
I'm loving this story. And seriously Mal, shower cap?? ;D I guess they don't use it in warrior caste families. Is there going to be a new chapter?

I'm working on a new chapter...
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Re: Evrial
« Reply #32 on: September 04, 2012, 07:41:09 pm »
Wonderful story. Can't wait to see how it plays out  :D

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Re: Evrial
« Reply #33 on: September 06, 2012, 01:59:35 pm »
Chapter 4...Enjoy!

BTW: Chapters 4 and 5 are heading into an R rating.
« Last Edit: September 06, 2012, 02:01:35 pm by Aamartin »
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Re: Evrial
« Reply #34 on: September 06, 2012, 02:09:48 pm »
Hihihi, I like Mal in this story. He's a big lovable oaf, and he shows a surprising amount of humanity under his braggings :) Love it!
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Re: Evrial
« Reply #35 on: September 06, 2012, 02:46:00 pm »
Amazing! I'm a big fan of Mal and Yara (aren't we all? :) ), so this is just lovely!
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Re: Evrial
« Reply #36 on: September 06, 2012, 02:53:31 pm »
Thank you!
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Re: Evrial
« Reply #37 on: September 06, 2012, 03:15:17 pm »
Thanks for another great chapter :)

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Re: Evrial
« Reply #38 on: September 06, 2012, 04:01:33 pm »
Wow.  This is really engrossing.  Keep going (as if you need the encouragement).

If someone plays his cards correctly I predict that the next few chapters will be R rated at minimum. 

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Re: Evrial
« Reply #39 on: September 06, 2012, 04:53:13 pm »
Awesome!

<made post very short so you won't be distracted from writing next chapter>

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Re: Evrial
« Reply #40 on: September 06, 2012, 06:37:14 pm »
So you're pro Mal getting lucky?
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Re: Evrial
« Reply #41 on: September 07, 2012, 03:18:41 am »
Mal should get lucky, but its gonna be Yara that controls this one!  Ooh that boy is in for an eye opening time!
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Re: Evrial
« Reply #42 on: September 07, 2012, 10:52:44 am »
So you're pro Mal getting lucky?

To channel Mal for a moment:  *he looks affronted by your comment*  "It's not luck it's skill!"

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Re: Evrial
« Reply #43 on: September 07, 2012, 06:37:52 pm »
Um... Is that a twitter confession?
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Re: Evrial
« Reply #44 on: September 07, 2012, 07:53:14 pm »
Chapter 5 (a little bit R, but mostly PG-13).
« Last Edit: September 09, 2012, 07:26:20 pm by Aamartin »
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