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maggiej117

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Loss
« on: August 31, 2012, 02:39:19 am »
This was stupidly hard to write and I'm going to stick to the emotionless Sicarius things. Anyways, Amaranthe and her father's death

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Re: Loss
« Reply #1 on: August 31, 2012, 03:05:44 am »
awww man :(
Stress /noun/ : The confusion created when the mind must override the body's basic desire to choke the ever-loving-shit out of someone who desperately deserves it.

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Re: Loss
« Reply #2 on: August 31, 2012, 03:06:35 am »
did it make you sad?

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Re: Loss
« Reply #3 on: August 31, 2012, 03:07:43 am »
very, and thats not good at 9am on a friday.  you are too good some times
Stress /noun/ : The confusion created when the mind must override the body's basic desire to choke the ever-loving-shit out of someone who desperately deserves it.

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Re: Loss
« Reply #4 on: August 31, 2012, 03:08:47 am »
I made someone sad with my writing  :o That's great!

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Re: Loss
« Reply #5 on: August 31, 2012, 03:10:00 am »
I'd say you are a scary young lady, but consdiering the forum we're on you are perfectly normal :D
Stress /noun/ : The confusion created when the mind must override the body's basic desire to choke the ever-loving-shit out of someone who desperately deserves it.

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Re: Loss
« Reply #6 on: August 31, 2012, 03:12:26 am »
always reassuring when insanity is considered the norm...

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Re: Loss
« Reply #7 on: August 31, 2012, 03:13:38 am »
nothing wrong with being original, and so long as you know the difference between criminal and civil laws then its even more fun ;)
Stress /noun/ : The confusion created when the mind must override the body's basic desire to choke the ever-loving-shit out of someone who desperately deserves it.

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Re: Loss
« Reply #8 on: August 31, 2012, 03:15:32 am »
:D

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Re: Loss
« Reply #9 on: August 31, 2012, 03:18:55 am »
You managed to put a lot of pathos in a relatively short piece. And damn, OUCH. Poor Amaranthe.

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Re: Loss
« Reply #10 on: August 31, 2012, 03:20:43 am »
thanks

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Re: Loss
« Reply #11 on: August 31, 2012, 03:22:04 am »
Poor Amaranthe. I wonder if he would have said "Don't disappoint me" on his deathbed though? Or did he mean to say something extra along with that and didn't get a chance to say it? But nicely written anyway :D

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Re: Loss
« Reply #12 on: August 31, 2012, 03:25:35 am »
I always imagined he knew she didn't want to go into business and he didn't want her to go be a complete idiot.

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Re: Loss
« Reply #13 on: August 31, 2012, 09:14:42 am »
Very evocative. Poor Ammy...
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Re: Loss
« Reply #14 on: August 31, 2012, 01:00:46 pm »
Having those be his last words is just too tragic.  I read it this morning and have had to mull it over.  I think her bond with her father was way too close for him to leave her with something like that!  I thought he was going to say something more like, "knew you didn't want business... I'll always be proud of you." 
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