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Mana

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Pretty Face
« on: September 02, 2012, 11:24:20 am »
Here is chapters 1-6 from my Akstyr story.

Title: Pretty Face
Rated: R sexual themes
Date: 8/31/2012
A fanfiction of the Emperor's Edge Series
By A. Findley
Disclaimer: We don't know much about Akstyr's past and I don't feel like I can infer what his childhood was like in the same way as I can "see" Little!Sicarius. So I had a little bit of fun with this pre-canon piece.  Enjoy.
« Last Edit: September 05, 2012, 09:45:30 pm by Mana »
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Re: Pre-EE Akstyr (No title yet)
« Reply #1 on: September 02, 2012, 11:40:02 am »
Interresting start!  I like Ravena... unfortunately, I don'T think she'll come to a good end :(
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Re: Pre-EE Akstyr (No title yet)
« Reply #2 on: September 03, 2012, 12:03:15 pm »
Aww, protective!Akstyr is actually pretty sweet ;)
Once you've made sure that the signal gets through
There's one final thing that I want you to do
Put me where I'll see stars, so that I can see you
And I'll soar like a leaf on the wind

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Re: Pre-EE Akstyr (No title yet)
« Reply #3 on: September 03, 2012, 12:27:01 pm »
Yes, Akstyr is very sweet and protective and oddly doesn't seem inept when it comes to this girl he likes, and so - enjoying the story, not sure it's really our Akstyr though!! :)

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Re: Pre-EE Akstyr (No title yet)
« Reply #4 on: September 03, 2012, 02:06:06 pm »
I think it could have been our Akstyr, though, much like Amaranthe thinks about the man Sicarius could have been.   He wasn't always the completely mistrusting teenager he is when we met him. 
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Re: Pre-EE Akstyr (No title yet)
« Reply #5 on: September 03, 2012, 02:28:44 pm »
Akstyr is a kid who's seen too much. I think this could definitely shape into one of those things that makes him the surly, untrusting Akstyr we know
Once you've made sure that the signal gets through
There's one final thing that I want you to do
Put me where I'll see stars, so that I can see you
And I'll soar like a leaf on the wind

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Re: Pre-EE Akstyr (No title yet)
« Reply #6 on: September 03, 2012, 02:29:25 pm »
Akstyr is a kid who's seen too much. I think this could definitely shape into one of those things that makes him the surly, untrusting Akstyr we know

:)

It'll take a few chapters but he'll get there.
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Re: Pre-EE Akstyr (No title yet)
« Reply #7 on: September 03, 2012, 02:50:29 pm »
Chapter 2 is posted on the OP
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Re: Pre-EE Akstyr (No title yet)
« Reply #8 on: September 03, 2012, 03:37:56 pm »
Chapter 2 is posted on the OP

Okay, that's more Askterious to me! :) And I really, REALLY hope Ravena doesn't get... hurt. Oy.

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Re: Pre-EE Akstyr (No title yet)
« Reply #9 on: September 04, 2012, 10:25:12 pm »
Added chapters 1-5 to original post
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Re: Pre-EE Akstyr (No title yet)
« Reply #10 on: September 05, 2012, 08:39:55 am »
Woooooo go Akstyr!!!!!!!  :D
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Re: Pre-EE Akstyr (No title yet)
« Reply #11 on: September 05, 2012, 08:55:32 am »
He was quite reluctant to talk about it...
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Re: Pre-EE Akstyr (No title yet)
« Reply #12 on: September 05, 2012, 09:45:31 am »
Ohhh Akstyr and the tribute Mohawk. You're a sweetie under all that bad attitude.
Once you've made sure that the signal gets through
There's one final thing that I want you to do
Put me where I'll see stars, so that I can see you
And I'll soar like a leaf on the wind

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Re: Pre-EE Akstyr (No title yet)
« Reply #13 on: September 05, 2012, 04:52:15 pm »
This is great, because even after book 4, I still didn't feel much sympathy with Akstyr. Yay fanfic!

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Re: Pretty Face
« Reply #14 on: September 05, 2012, 09:46:25 pm »
Ok, so Akstyr was more forthcoming with his anger than he was when I tried to tease out his love scene. 

Poor 'Vena!
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