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Black Arrows
« on: September 19, 2012, 04:12:00 pm »
Title: Black Arrows
Rated: R sexual themes
Date: 9/17/2012
A fanfiction of the Emperor's Edge Series
By A. Findley
Disclaimer: Akstyr doesn't like to talk about it... Enjoy.


Chapter 1
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Re: Black Arrows
« Reply #1 on: September 19, 2012, 04:32:19 pm »
Interesting. I look forward to seeing where this goes.  :)
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Re: Black Arrows
« Reply #2 on: September 20, 2012, 03:18:24 am »
looking good can't wait to see where this one goes
Stress /noun/ : The confusion created when the mind must override the body's basic desire to choke the ever-loving-shit out of someone who desperately deserves it.

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Re: Black Arrows
« Reply #3 on: September 20, 2012, 06:00:06 am »
Very interesting I like it
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Re: Black Arrows
« Reply #4 on: September 21, 2012, 09:25:21 pm »
Oh man.  Somebody needs to draw a portrait of really angry, edgy Akstyr.  Not the way we know and love him now, but back when he was well and truly ANGRY. 

It's going to be some serious inspiration for more art and fanfic. 
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Re: Black Arrows
« Reply #5 on: September 22, 2012, 09:00:54 am »
Where's Cael?
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Re: Black Arrows
« Reply #6 on: September 22, 2012, 02:23:22 pm »
*And the chain drive releases the roller coaster car.* I can see already this is going to be a wild ride.

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Re: Black Arrows
« Reply #7 on: September 22, 2012, 02:58:51 pm »
Where's Cael?

I draw cute (see -> Woobie!Sespian) and write angst :P
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Re: Black Arrows
« Reply #8 on: September 22, 2012, 03:09:13 pm »
*And the chain drive releases the roller coaster car.* I can see already this is going to be a wild ride.

Really?
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Re: Black Arrows
« Reply #9 on: September 22, 2012, 05:26:28 pm »
Chapters 2 & 3
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Re: Black Arrows
« Reply #10 on: September 22, 2012, 05:40:59 pm »
Ok I'm intrigued. I always had only a bit of sympathy for Akstyr, what with growing up on the streets and all, but you brought more to him, I think. Will you go up until he meets Amaranthe?
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Re: Black Arrows
« Reply #11 on: September 22, 2012, 05:42:23 pm »
Ok I'm intrigued. I always had only a bit of sympathy for Akstyr, what with growing up on the streets and all, but you brought more to him, I think. Will you go up until he meets Amaranthe?

Not sure, depends on how much he will tell me.

His character is hard to interpret but I'm getting better at hearing him.

I really tried to build sympathy for him in Pretty Face so that the contrast was there between the surly jackass we know now and what he could have been.
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Re: Black Arrows
« Reply #12 on: September 22, 2012, 05:51:23 pm »
I think you've really done a good job with that. Can't wait for more!
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« Reply #13 on: September 23, 2012, 12:08:21 am »
I think you've really done a good job with that. Can't wait for more!

Me too!

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Re: Black Arrows
« Reply #14 on: September 23, 2012, 05:18:31 am »
Finally got to read this now - it's good work! Please write more!