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In A Mirror, Dimly
« on: September 24, 2012, 12:21:13 pm »
This is the first installment of a monster plot bunny that's been eating my time.  It occurs before Encrypted but after the war.  I had a bit of a hard time getting into a 15 yr old Sicarius' head.  I apologize in advance for typos, punctuation errors and funny formatting. 

Edit:  As promised here's the whole thing at the top of the thread.
« Last Edit: October 10, 2012, 10:53:55 am by K2N2 »

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Re: In A Mirror, Dimly
« Reply #1 on: September 24, 2012, 12:30:37 pm »
Very interresting beginning. I'll be looking to see where this is going :)
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Re: In A Mirror, Dimly
« Reply #2 on: September 24, 2012, 12:43:44 pm »
interesting premise. looking forward to where this one is going
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Re: In A Mirror, Dimly
« Reply #3 on: September 24, 2012, 12:53:09 pm »
Yes, love young Sicarius, Im looking forward to see where this will go.
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Re: In A Mirror, Dimly
« Reply #4 on: September 24, 2012, 01:03:40 pm »
moar
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Re: In A Mirror, Dimly
« Reply #5 on: September 24, 2012, 03:27:41 pm »
I hate to be redundant but...I think it's interesting as well. I do like the little things he does in rebellion, and I can't wait for more!
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Re: In A Mirror, Dimly
« Reply #6 on: September 24, 2012, 04:09:53 pm »
Loved it. Please do continue. :)
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Re: In A Mirror, Dimly
« Reply #7 on: September 24, 2012, 05:21:11 pm »
Yes, please continue! 15 is old enough for Sic to be essentially adult (all things considered), so his teenage rebellion is intelligent. Fascinating time period. Looking forward!

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Re: In A Mirror, Dimly
« Reply #8 on: September 25, 2012, 11:12:57 am »
Chapter 2 is now attached with a completely new character for your enjoyment.

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Re: In A Mirror, Dimly
« Reply #9 on: September 25, 2012, 11:22:50 am »
Ohhh... even more interresting. I wonder how both part of the story will cross. Moar please?


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Re: In A Mirror, Dimly
« Reply #10 on: September 25, 2012, 11:53:34 am »
Ohhh... even more interresting. I wonder how both part of the story will cross. Moar please?
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Re: In A Mirror, Dimly
« Reply #11 on: September 25, 2012, 01:04:39 pm »
ooh even more interesting.  looking forward to more of this
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Re: In A Mirror, Dimly
« Reply #12 on: September 25, 2012, 02:27:49 pm »
Ooo I'm getting Child of the Ghosts vibes here!
Once you've made sure that the signal gets through
There's one final thing that I want you to do
Put me where I'll see stars, so that I can see you
And I'll soar like a leaf on the wind

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Re: In A Mirror, Dimly
« Reply #13 on: September 25, 2012, 04:08:58 pm »
really cool.
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Re: In A Mirror, Dimly
« Reply #14 on: September 25, 2012, 04:39:02 pm »
Yes!! A female assassin! I'm looking forward to the next chapter  :D