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Santacarius: Hart (written for Mana)
« on: December 22, 2012, 12:39:29 am »
This is the gift for the Secret Santacarius exchange written for Mana.

Happy Solstice, Mana!
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Re: Santacarius: Hart (written for Mana)
« Reply #1 on: December 22, 2012, 06:10:26 am »
At first I wasn't too sure about this, but by the end of it I was really impressed. I love how different it is to the other's as well, it's all so peaceful and then BOOM! Enter Turgonians. Nice job  :D
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Re: Santacarius: Hart (written for Mana)
« Reply #2 on: December 22, 2012, 06:13:04 am »
This was reeaaaaally nicely written. I love that you focused on a different aspect of the EE series, rather than on the primary gang. Really nice!

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Re: Santacarius: Hart (written for Mana)
« Reply #3 on: December 22, 2012, 09:25:11 am »
aww man :( beautifully written and i felt i was following him through a beautiful oak woodland.
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Re: Santacarius: Hart (written for Mana)
« Reply #4 on: December 22, 2012, 11:01:37 am »
My favorite kind of story.

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Re: Santacarius: Hart (written for Mana)
« Reply #5 on: December 22, 2012, 11:23:30 am »
Oh I loved this! There was so much detail and that made it really interesting and of course Basilard is just amazing. You must add more!
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Re: Santacarius: Hart (written for Mana)
« Reply #6 on: December 22, 2012, 05:23:34 pm »
Beautifully, beautifully written. Thank you!!

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Re: Santacarius: Hart (written for Mana)
« Reply #7 on: December 25, 2012, 07:00:02 pm »
I love the final version of this!  I hope you decide to continue this.  :)
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Re: Santacarius: Hart (written for Mana)
« Reply #8 on: December 26, 2012, 09:15:45 pm »
I wrote this! Littleredcoat and Meera beta read for me. :) Thanks go to them, too. <3 <3 <3

Thanks, everybody! I'm glad you all enjoyed it. There is more. I just need to get around to fleshing it out and editing it! You know, finishing it. The hard part. :P
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Re: Santacarius: Hart (written for Mana)
« Reply #9 on: December 27, 2012, 05:43:55 am »
I wrote this! Littleredcoat and Meera beta read for me. :) Thanks go to them, too. <3 <3 <3

Thanks, everybody! I'm glad you all enjoyed it. There is more. I just need to get around to fleshing it out and editing it! You know, finishing it. The hard part. :P

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Re: Santacarius: Hart (written for Mana)
« Reply #10 on: December 31, 2012, 02:24:36 pm »
This one is my favourite  :D
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