Author Topic: A Ghazal from Sespian's POV  (Read 2345 times)

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A Ghazal from Sespian's POV
« on: March 16, 2013, 05:57:30 pm »
I thought I'd try rhyming in form after being inspired by the other esteemed poets. I've taken a few western liberties but I think I have the general structure correct. Enjoy  :)
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K2N2

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Re: A Ghazal from Sespian's POV
« Reply #1 on: March 16, 2013, 07:52:08 pm »
Wonderful. 
Its nice to see the rhyme rabbits reproducing! 

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Re: A Ghazal from Sespian's POV
« Reply #2 on: March 17, 2013, 07:04:51 pm »
Great job!  I am loving this poetry! 

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Re: A Ghazal from Sespian's POV
« Reply #3 on: March 18, 2013, 06:13:45 am »
I'd never even heard of a ghazal before this.    :o
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Re: A Ghazal from Sespian's POV
« Reply #4 on: March 18, 2013, 11:03:25 am »
Widening the breadth of collective knowledge...just another service this forum provides!

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Re: A Ghazal from Sespian's POV
« Reply #5 on: March 22, 2013, 03:41:20 pm »
Thanks for the comments everyone!

I'd never even heard of a ghazal before this.    :o

Don't worry Ria, this forum has me searching on dictionary.com far more than I'd like to admit  :-[
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Re: A Ghazal from Sespian's POV
« Reply #6 on: March 23, 2013, 06:51:38 am »
Don't worry Ria, this forum has me searching on dictionary.com far more than I'd like to admit  :-[


lol!!  Google has probably wondered about some of my queries based off of this site. 
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