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Director's Cut
« on: July 20, 2013, 11:31:13 pm »
And that's all we're going to say about that.

MATURE CONTENT.
"Should we take their clothes?"
"To what end?"
"....Pockets?"

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Re: Director's Cut
« Reply #1 on: July 20, 2013, 11:32:28 pm »
We love you!!!! 

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Re: Director's Cut
« Reply #2 on: July 20, 2013, 11:42:04 pm »
You're like a magical naughty fairy.

Thank you.
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Re: Director's Cut
« Reply #3 on: July 20, 2013, 11:48:03 pm »
Wow. Just... Wow. Always knew he had a talented tongue.
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Re: Director's Cut
« Reply #4 on: July 21, 2013, 01:39:47 am »
I'm going to say this after I clicked the link but before I read.

I bow to you. I am at your disposal. If you need anyone discreetly removed from the land of the breathing, you just say the word and it'll happen.

Now that I've vowed my fealty, I'm going to go read ;D
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Re: Director's Cut
« Reply #5 on: July 21, 2013, 04:37:37 am »
You, sir, are freaking awesome. I may now die happy.

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« Reply #6 on: July 21, 2013, 10:12:06 am »
I'm going to say this after I clicked the link but before I read.

I bow to you. I am at your disposal. If you need anyone discreetly removed from the land of the breathing, you just say the word and it'll happen.

Now that I've vowed my fealty, I'm going to go read ;D

Let me join the group of appreciative fans who will grant you favors.  And now, I'm going to reread this for the fourth time.

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Re: Director's Cut
« Reply #7 on: July 21, 2013, 10:34:41 am »

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Let me join the group of appreciative fans who will grant you favors.

Thank you! And yes, "steamier" is the right word. 0_0
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« Reply #8 on: July 21, 2013, 01:20:57 pm »
I am also in the appreciative fan group who will shower you with favors!!

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Re: Director's Cut
« Reply #9 on: July 21, 2013, 02:35:16 pm »
While I'm very flattered by the appreciation...Empress Lindsay is the one to thank. :)
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« Reply #10 on: July 21, 2013, 04:39:11 pm »
His thought in the last scene about being embarrassed by how eager to please he had been makes more sense now.
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« Reply #11 on: July 21, 2013, 06:55:23 pm »
Very true.  And very eager!

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Re: Director's Cut
« Reply #12 on: July 21, 2013, 07:37:22 pm »
"You first." 

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Re: Director's Cut
« Reply #13 on: July 21, 2013, 08:46:29 pm »
"Much.  Often."


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Re: Director's Cut
« Reply #14 on: July 21, 2013, 10:09:49 pm »
While I'm very flattered by the appreciation...Empress Lindsay is the one to thank. :)

She cooks the crack; you deal it. I think we have both of you to thank :P
Once you've made sure that the signal gets through
There's one final thing that I want you to do
Put me where I'll see stars, so that I can see you
And I'll soar like a leaf on the wind