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SPYforYOU

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Line of Heads
« on: August 20, 2013, 01:09:46 pm »
This is when Sicarius kills the family of five (the King, his wife, and his kids).
I tried to make him not too sentimental, he was raised a killer after all, yet he still does have human emotions. I hope I balanced the two.
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Re: Line of Heads
« Reply #1 on: August 20, 2013, 01:32:09 pm »
Perfection!
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Re: Line of Heads
« Reply #2 on: August 20, 2013, 02:21:59 pm »
Well done.  Reading this makes it harder to overlook Sic's past...

Keep the fan fics coming!  I'm really enjoying them :)

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Re: Line of Heads
« Reply #3 on: August 21, 2013, 05:37:17 am »
So excited we have new writers.

Looking forward to reading this.
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Re: Line of Heads
« Reply #4 on: August 21, 2013, 09:11:13 am »
not sure whether to say aww poor sic!  or you bar steward!!!!
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SPYforYOU

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Re: Line of Heads
« Reply #5 on: August 22, 2013, 01:51:39 pm »
Well done.  Reading this makes it harder to overlook Sic's past...

Keep the fan fics coming!  I'm really enjoying them :)

That you guys so much! I'm really glad you like it. And I'm happy for the warm welcome :)
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Re: Line of Heads
« Reply #6 on: August 24, 2013, 08:49:42 am »
Wow, well done.