Author Topic: The Treasure Chest  (Read 7740 times)

Cael

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Re: The Treasure Chest
« Reply #15 on: November 04, 2012, 01:04:55 am »
I believe we have given you far too much time to slack. (And I can't believe I haven't commented on this :O) Ahem. *delicately hits the caps lock*

"OMG WHAT HAPPENS NEXT YOU CAN'T LEAVE US HANGING LIKE THIS OMMMMMGGGGG!"

*primly disengages the caps lock*

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Re: The Treasure Chest
« Reply #16 on: November 04, 2012, 05:56:30 am »
What she just said up there :D
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Re: The Treasure Chest
« Reply #17 on: November 04, 2012, 12:23:48 pm »
Honestly?  I've tried to go back to this 4 or 5 times and I'm just STUCK!  I can't figure out where the story goes from there, and they just aren't talking to me.  Either they got drunk and blacked out, or something really embarrassing happened.
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Re: The Treasure Chest
« Reply #18 on: November 05, 2012, 01:35:46 am »
Are you inviting... collaboration?

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Re: The Treasure Chest
« Reply #19 on: November 05, 2012, 08:22:07 am »
Are you inviting... collaboration?
Possibly.  I have the day off, so once errands are done and the booboo is napping, I can chat about it.  :D 
It's 9:20am my time....so probably about 3 or 4 hours.
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Re: The Treasure Chest
« Reply #20 on: November 06, 2012, 08:38:25 am »
Finally got to read this! i need more!!!! Great story!
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Re: The Treasure Chest
« Reply #21 on: January 11, 2013, 08:54:16 am »
This is so cute. I think the team should present their party tricks. Akstyr could do that thing with a tree...
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Re: The Treasure Chest
« Reply #22 on: January 11, 2013, 12:24:48 pm »
Nice addition:). Keep going!

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Re: The Treasure Chest
« Reply #23 on: January 11, 2013, 03:32:55 pm »
tall blonde and psychotic.  love it :)
Stress /noun/ : The confusion created when the mind must override the body's basic desire to choke the ever-loving-shit out of someone who desperately deserves it.